The Forest for the Trees
” It’s easier to imagine the end of
the world
than it is the end of capitalism.”
~Slavoj Zizek
(Philosopher)
Poetry as we know it is dead.
Self-expression has been hijacked
by a glut of attention seekers
whose waking hours are spent
selling their souls for a crack
at self-importance, something
that can only arrive
alone and in the dark.
On the internet, everything is worn
on the sleeve for effect.
I am on film therefore I am.
To live on camera has become
a way of life for so many
of the world’s misunderstood youth.
It’s as if the only means
to be loved were to imprint
oneself upon another;
litmus strips convincing
each other of our
unique bacterial worth.
Appearing on a screen
is the body's new poetry.
In other words, to cause a stir
one must stir the collective LCD pot.
This condition of modern life
betrays a demystification that
alienates us from the natural
world.
Modern life, disenchanted by
science
and mediated by technology,
has made our former relationship
with the macrocosm impossible,
even if we are professed botanists
or hikers, we become posers...
as cameras won’t let life be
itself.
Without the ability to see nature
as the dwelling place of unseen
forces,
teeming with images to be summoned
and transformed, as opposed to
an undifferentiated mass of
resources
to be either exploited or preserved,
it is unlikely that we will fancy
the work of Homer or Virgil,
and even less likely that we will
create such images ourselves.
I have become unable
to wax poetically
on a forest as I find
descriptions of trees tedious.
Descriptions of nature do not
take us to themselves, but
rather suffer by comparison.
We have the means now
to take us directly to trees.
it’s called photography.
But then, a poem
breaks the cinematic rules.
A tree. A birch.
Pale skin, dark eyes.
Peeling limbs
thrusting hands
in every pocket,
gnarled roots hiding
below in darkness
strangling anything
in their path.
They live
a double existence.
White in the light,
while in the dark
nary a need
for eyes or skin.
Brutish bull dozers
carving existence out
with their fists.
Their nature, subversive.
Their means, survival,
living in two worlds
simultaneously.
Above and below.
Feeding on dirt
and moisture
and yet worshiping
the sky whiles
they keep
their feet firmly
on the ground.
Will we live only
on their meridian
unless we
learn to burrow?
Is poetry still possible?
Can we still write verse
if not about the perceived
transcendent order in the universe,
then about the feelings
of unease within ourselves?
Will we draw our images
from the detritus
of consumer civilization;
an empty plastic bottle,
an iPhone with a cracked screen.
For me, I want
the forest for the trees.
For poetry to reappear, the muses
must return from wherever
they fled when we banished them.
The conditions for their return
I suspect, would be the end of
the internet and many other things
that most of us value far more
than poetry.
But then, what if
we’re left
mourning the absence of
something we can
no longer name?
1/3/23
1 comment:
Peter! I just read your wonderful and thought provoking piece of work several times! Shoot me, but I still want to say Essay! However it’s defined, the writing is, nonetheless, substantive! The messages throughout are crystal clear as you never lost course. Peter, you are, in essence, documenting “history” here, allowing future generations to see how late 20th century and early 21st century minds on earth converged, individually and collectively, during the dominant onset and the wide spread use of the internet and other impersonal means of communication during the computer age, which, has shifted how, we, as humans relate to ourselves, each other and to the world at large. Your writing brings to mind a thought to ponder…Are these shifts in behaviors, perceptions and perspectives, that the computer age birthed, really a progressive advancement when viewed from a humane rather than from a capitalistic plane? I love the mystic element of the “Muses” that you incorporated in this piece, because, one does wonder where does all of that information that is constantly sent and received ultimately reside, and, who is controlling its birth and demise in cyber space and in the clouds? Your analogy of the birch tree bears a striking resemblance to life itself, with two elements operating simultaneously in each individual, with, the focus on survival. Specifically, “The “Id”, or, that raw,
deep roosted and primal element that only the individual sees, like the tangling roots of the birch tree, moves in uncalculated and unabashed directions, making no apologies to anyone or anything. Self gratification.
And, then, there is “The Ego”, that more submissive appeasing element that communicates what the social mores dictate, like, the birch tree obediently looking upward, arms reaching up. This rather complex duality is present in every individual, in the quest for survival and acceptance in this vast world we call home. All of the images and sounds that you’ve summoned relating to present day habitation, Peter,
resonate truth. The pictures and colors are crystal clear.
I was just thinking yesterday, that, before cell phones, cell phone cameras and cell phone video devices, how we had to really listen, see and store moments and experiences into our personal and internal memory banks, because, the aforementioned devices were not a crutch at our ever present beckoning call. Selfies were not a part of daily terminology. Therefore, the individual had to be present, moment by moment, and, in control, mentally, physically and spiritually, as opposed to a machine or a device dictating the capture. Your writing makes one wonder if a commitment to really experiencing life as it is presented to each of us…A lost art? As you’ve laid out on the table so vividly, how is poetry and all of the other beautiful genres of Art affected by all of this? With that said, it’s virtually impossible to glaze over any of it, with, the internet and its sister and brother components, playing a significant role in the altered states of mind and key perceptions, which, include poetry. Thought provoking to say the least. Peter, this piece could also be very effective as a three minute mini-film short, and, as a five minute short play, with no dialogue in either, but, rather, bringing your words and messages to life, through movement and physical activities, with a thread containing a strong beginning, middle and end for each story. It would be interesting to see how future generations perceive poetry and all of the other genres of Art. The last stanza really opens one’s eyes in the midst of trying to see if there is a resolve in the horizon? Since true Art always, inevitably, like your writings, heal and enlighten, even if the answer is not clear, the quest for true Art must always prevail. Another meaningful, profound and exciting piece of work, Peter! Keep writing and sharing your gifts! BRAVO! ✍️��
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